cool to see you over at dVerse Padmavani...and with a beautiful poem, written with a tender pen..the gentle glow and the sweet fragments of the other's soul...i still carry some precious memories of first love around..
I see this more as a generous woman observing her mate involved in a moment of sweet nostalgia and not begrudging. Whichever way this was meant, it's indeed a tender and loving poem.
cool to see you over at dVerse Padmavani...and with a beautiful poem, written with a tender pen..the gentle glow and the sweet fragments of the other's soul...i still carry some precious memories of first love around..
ReplyDeletesmiles. no i think you wove it well for us...seeing ones first love in the arms of another...i remember mine...great to see you at dverse!
ReplyDeleteI see this more as a generous woman observing her mate involved in a moment of sweet nostalgia and not begrudging. Whichever way this was meant, it's indeed a tender and loving poem.
ReplyDeleteThank you for dropping by Claudia, Brian, Joy! Joy, you are spot on about the idea :)
ReplyDeleteLovely and very generously written. This shows us a great deal about who you are Padmavani; as always, precious!
ReplyDeleteThank you for joining Poets United. We look forward to visiting your blog and reading poetry. We also look forward to seeing you in our community.
ReplyDeleteInk runs from the corners of my mouth
There is no happiness like mine.
I have been eating poetry.
~Mark Strand
Cuddly very nice!
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